Session With Justin

 I had an opportunity to discuss my idea with a tutor called Justin and got some feedback:

• The idea is okay, but he felt it should have more of a focus on the chase rather than trying to set up an elaborate plot.
• He suggested I start on a ship with a live chicken or animal and have the chicken outsmart the chef continuously. Leading him to leave the ship and eventually get stuck in cement with the chicken and be unable to get the chicken as the boat sails off. 
• He also suggested that leaving the fantasy aspect of mt original idea would lead to a stronger concept and idea.